(This is my writing homework)
A Person who Has Made a Difference: Young Choon Lee.
I want to talk about a person who has made a difference is Young choon Lee who is my
father. He helps me whenever I got a hard time. Another one is that he is my mentor. It is big
reason why I choose my father who has make a difference.
First of all, He is my supporter which means what I need something he can solve. I know
this is not a source of pride. Now, I am a student, so I can’t handle about money. Some students
who make money by them self use money without parents’ permission, because they make
money, but I am not that one. I am learning English in USA. It means I can’t make money by
myself. I perfectly have to depend on my parents especially my father. If I get a nice job and
make money after graduation, every month I will give to my parents about 10% of my salary. It
is like a insurance. It’s just my thinking. If he didn’t support to me, maybe I couldn’t come here.
Even he is always first talking with me when I got problems. Last winter vacation, I really
was worry about me because I didn’t want to waste my golden time because I had been
studying for the TOEFL but still I don’t get it , so I thought that I went back to South Korea.
However, he talked me that English is really hard language especially Korean. We are totally
different grammar, so you need to more time. You are doing well, so if you are going to do a
little bit harder and then you will get what you wanted. He always give to me courage, and he
cheer me up.
That is why I chosen my father. He is my hero not only just my father but also my senior of life.
Your father is so NICE!!! he is the most important person for u^^ It is good thing for u. And also im in the same way with u. We need someones help while we are living!!
ReplyDeleteI want to meet your father^^
ReplyDeleteit will be good time for me! haha
and My father also really nice person
next time I will talk about my father.
Wow, you're so diligent!!!
ReplyDeleteI think I have to copy you!